Nothing wrong
\nby cricketjeff on January 6, 2008.\u00a0 \u00a9 Jeff Green, All rights reserved
\nAn early night to rest my aching head.
\nI feel you lie beside me on my bed
\nAnd so I turn to loving you instead.
\nA night with you cures all that’s wrong with me.<\/p>\n
You kiss me as you come to me each night.
\nAnd everything you do to me is right.
\nAs long as you are there to hold me tight.
\nIf I’m with you there’s nothing wrong with me.<\/p>\n
And all day long I work and think of you.
\nOf how I wish that I could be with you.
\nI would be feeling all the things you do.
\nYou’re in my head, there’s nothing wrong with me.<\/p>\n
Together is the only way to be.
\nAs then there can be nothing wrong for me.
\n Author notes
\nI love triplets, I am learning to write sonnets. I have never seen a “triplet
\nsonnet” until now. A sonnet is three rhyming quatrains and a rhyming couplet,
\nall lines decasyllabic and ideally iambic. If that’s an acceptable description
\nthen this is a sonnet.
\nRhyming scheme AAAB CCCB DDDB BB In my triplets I like the last line of each
\nquatrain to be repeated or developed and I have repeated that here, don’t see
\nany reason why it can’t be done that way or with normal “B” rhymes.
\nAnyone like the idea? Anyone ever seen one before?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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