{"id":3655,"date":"2023-11-26T20:27:32","date_gmt":"2023-11-26T20:27:32","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/?page_id=3655"},"modified":"2023-11-28T22:06:26","modified_gmt":"2023-11-28T22:06:26","slug":"just-working-on-these-in-private","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/j-poems\/just-working-on-these-in-private\/","title":{"rendered":"Just working on these in private"},"content":{"rendered":"<p> Just working on these in private<br \/>\nby cricketjeff on March 2, 2009.\u00a0 \u00a9 Jeff Green, All rights reserved<br \/>\n     This is possibly a competition entry so cannot be published yet but I<br \/>\n     find it easier to correct and polish poems I see on screen<br \/>\n\u00a0<br \/>\n\u00a0<br \/>\nDewdrops \u00a0<br \/>\nEach evening since he met her she had tucked herself away;<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 A special gift her Grandmother had said.<br \/>\nThe soft cold gold inspired her and she knew just what to say,<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 With pen in hand the words were in her head.<br \/>\nEach word she wrote was from her heart and every line was true;<br \/>\nThe rich blue ink rolled from the nib as fresh as morning dew.<\/p>\n<p>The summer dance where first they kissed was set down on a page,<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 The way he held her turned to gentle rhyme.<br \/>\nThe words she wrote that evening seemed to say she&#8217;d come of age<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 And she would dance with him for all of time.<br \/>\nA waltz of words cascaded from the love that she now knew,<br \/>\nHer poetry was sweeter than an April morning&#8217;s dew.<\/p>\n<p>The day he knelt before her with a ring that shone with fire<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Became a crown of sonnets overnight.<br \/>\nHer Grandma&#8217;s pen recorded every nuance of desire,<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Those verses seemed to fill her mind with light.<br \/>\nThe gift to paint your lifetime is accorded to so few,<br \/>\nAnd fewer still record it with the gleam of mountain dew.<\/p>\n<p>Their wedding day was rain-swept but the sun was in her heart<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 And not a cloud obscured her poetry.<br \/>\nThe pen again transcribed it and it took an active part<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 It changed her words to perfect harmony.<br \/>\nTradition says a bride must wear a single thing that&#8217;s blue<br \/>\nA sapphire broach from Grandma&#8217;s box that spoke of falling dew.<\/p>\n<p>The midwife held the baby while she sat and wrote in bed,<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 The day their first born daughter came to stay.<br \/>\nAnother page of magic told of all that would be said,<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 And all the times the two of them would play.<br \/>\nThe rolled gold nib just seemed to know the love that would ensue<br \/>\nAnd helped her turn her feelings into meadows kissed with dew.<\/p>\n<p>Just two more years before their son the image of his dad<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Was set down in her round and loving hand<br \/>\nThe pen responded sweetly and she knew that it was glad<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 Her family was now completely scanned<br \/>\nShe sighed in satisfaction and her writing gave a clue<br \/>\nShe saw the world as hedgerows that were dressed in crystal dew<\/p>\n<p>The dreadful day her husband died the pen was laid aside<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 No longer felt the need to sit and write<br \/>\nShe bound her leather notebooks and she waited for the tide<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 That told her that her life was nearing night<br \/>\nEach morning now was empty and the rain beat a tattoo<br \/>\nNo longer could she see each day beneath its shining dew<\/p>\n<p>Her daughter&#8217;s daughter visited and brought a smiling man<br \/>\n\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0 And then the pen was writing in her mind<br \/>\nA special gift was handed from a very loving Nan<br 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