{"id":4485,"date":"2023-11-26T20:26:46","date_gmt":"2023-11-26T20:26:46","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/?page_id=4485"},"modified":"2023-11-28T22:00:01","modified_gmt":"2023-11-28T22:00:01","slug":"ill-never-write-a-decent-villanelle","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/i-poems\/ill-never-write-a-decent-villanelle\/","title":{"rendered":"I\\&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle"},"content":{"rendered":"<p> I&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle<br \/>\nby cricketjeff on March 13, 2010.\u00a0 \u00a9 Jeff Green, All rights reserved<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s hard to make the repetition tell<br \/>\nEach time I try I leave the flow behind<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle<\/p>\n<p>So tough that few have ever done it well<br \/>\nThough good ones stick so firmly in the mind<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s hard to make the repetition tell<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes my tries have found poetic Hell<br \/>\n&#8220;A good attempt&#8221; would really be too kind<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle<\/p>\n<p>Each Dylan Thomas line is like a shell<br \/>\nAnd with each one your doubts are undermined<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s hard to make the repetition tell<\/p>\n<p>The form is tight it&#8217;s tempting to rebel<br \/>\nAnd hope that those who read my lines are blind<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle<\/p>\n<p>Let this last verse become my final knell<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll try to keep the message I&#8217;ve enshrined<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s hard to make the repetition tell<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle<\/p>\n<p> Author notes<br \/>\nHowever I doubt I really will give up, if it wasn&#8217;t for bloody Dylan Thomas I<br \/>\nwould probably just assume that the form was too restrictive to come up with a<br \/>\ngood modern one, but other people on AP do and his is one of the 20th century&#8217;s<br \/>\ngreatest poems so I will doubtless return to the attempt.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle by cricketjeff on March 13, 2010.\u00a0 \u00a9 Jeff Green, All rights reserved It&#8217;s hard to make the repetition tell Each time I try I leave the flow behind I&#8217;ll never write a decent villanelle So tough that few have ever done it well Though good ones stick so firmly [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"parent":9718,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-4485","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/4485","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=4485"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/4485\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":7022,"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/4485\/revisions\/7022"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/9718"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/nicewaistcoat.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=4485"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}